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Remnants of the First · File 005

Preston Hale

Defendant
Double homicide

“If you told Natalie she was the only person who really got you, she’d forgive almost anything.”

Name
Preston Hale
Age
25
Status
In custody, awaiting trial
Family
Son of Richard Hale, yes, that Hale, the one with his name on the hospital wings
Charged with
The murders of Natalie Mercer, 23, and Erin Shaw, 26
Evaluated by
Dr. Marielle Baptiste, retained by his defense
Currently
Waiting on trial, and not nearly as worried as he should be

The short version

Preston Hale is twenty-five, rich, ridiculously good looking, and charged with killing two women. Natalie Mercer drowned behind his family’s lake house and it was ruled an accident, right up until it wasn’t, and then there was Erin Shaw. His father’s money bought him the best defense lawyers in the state, and those lawyers hired Marielle to evaluate him, which means whatever he tells her in that room has to stay between them.

He’s charming in the way people are when nobody has ever really told them no, and he’s bored in a room where he should be terrified. Marielle doesn’t like that at all.

Worships his father. Can’t stand his mother. Write that down.

Bored, not scared.
Two women are dead
and he’s bored. M

Thumb rubbing his index finger again. That’s the tell.

Evidence log File 005

No.ItemNote
01Phone records, 3:14 a.m.Redacted
02Lake house guest listIncomplete
03Statement: “There’s no one else.”M. A. B.

Logged and sealed.

Personality

  • Charming, and he’s been getting away with it his whole life
  • Bored where anyone else would be scared
  • Worships his father and can’t stand his mother
  • Knows exactly what to say to make someone forgive him
  • Has a temper he thinks nobody can see
  • Remembers everything except the parts that matter

Noted details

  • 01He holds eye contact a beat too long. It’s practiced.
  • 02Escape? Reset? Next time…

Things he “can’t remember”:

  • Who else was at the lake house that weekend
  • What he was looking up at 3:14 in the morning

What his father’s money buys

  • The best defense lawyers in the state
  • Hospital wings with the Hale name on them
  • A trauma center that treats every species
  • TV interviews calling all of this “a travesty of justice”
  • Time

Observed

I asked if Natalie had been upset about something else.

He said, “There’s no one else.”

I hadn’t asked about anyone.

M. A. B.

File status: Awaiting trial

Preston Hale

“You’d be surprised what people will forgive.”

P. H.

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If that sounds like you, send me your commission prices and anything else I should know.

♥ Athena

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